tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8282404457878587302.post1755930495347018084..comments2023-10-28T14:16:50.913+05:30Comments on :: PRANEY'S NIVEDAN ::: My DreamPraney !http://www.blogger.com/profile/16142299540638658215noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8282404457878587302.post-55193483791007363362007-04-22T15:08:00.000+05:302007-04-22T15:08:00.000+05:30Now the changes really made the poem awesome!!!I d...Now the changes really made the poem awesome!!!<BR/><BR/>I don't know whether you feel in that way or not.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8282404457878587302.post-43134322086647958892007-04-20T19:23:00.000+05:302007-04-20T19:23:00.000+05:30No need to be sorry Juneli, thanks for your sugges...No need to be sorry <B>Juneli</B>, thanks for your suggestions .Praney !https://www.blogger.com/profile/16142299540638658215noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8282404457878587302.post-3809861834748148392007-04-20T15:39:00.000+05:302007-04-20T15:39:00.000+05:30Too beautiful and romantic dream. Really love this...Too beautiful and romantic dream. <BR/><BR/>Really love this one. <BR/><BR/>But my suggestion is here<BR/><BR/>Yeh khwab dekhta hoon main seems repeatations. <BR/><BR/>It's would sound more better if you write the 3rd and 4th line of antaras as the mukhada then it would be more effective one and would be much much better. <BR/><BR/>for the example : <BR/><BR/>Tum sneh se niharti, yeh aankh dekhtaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8282404457878587302.post-28126789035561235282007-04-19T21:38:00.000+05:302007-04-19T21:38:00.000+05:30Thanks a lot Deepak & Manish!(Just hope you guys a...Thanks a lot <B>Deepak</B> & <B>Manish</B>!<BR/><BR/>(Just hope you guys are serious, lol )Praney !https://www.blogger.com/profile/16142299540638658215noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8282404457878587302.post-89837970596199378062007-04-18T10:30:00.000+05:302007-04-18T10:30:00.000+05:30Without any elaboration, this one is notches above...Without any elaboration, this one is notches above your first one. Terrefic stuff. One more reason to get hooked to your blog.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08606261259115163927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8282404457878587302.post-16934418622318339652007-04-18T08:25:00.000+05:302007-04-18T08:25:00.000+05:30Those who dare and dream, they win. And you did to...Those who dare and dream, they win. And you did too. Loved both the poems!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8282404457878587302.post-29391644250599305252007-04-16T14:10:00.000+05:302007-04-16T14:10:00.000+05:30Just another dream.......Dreams do come true.God p...Just another dream.......<BR/>Dreams do come true.<BR/>God praney r u in LOVE ?<BR/>Every line so full of love dear.<BR/>I am lost in ur poetry.....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com