:: PRANEY'S NIVEDAN ::: Rupsee

Thursday, June 14, 2007

A Ghazal For A Ghazal !

Lo ji ! Another attempt is made. After Juneli posted Ghazals day after day, how can I stay behind, after all she is my poetry guru and I am following her foot steps :)

This purple flower attracted me at a petrol pump while refuelling my car and I captured this little one in my cell cam.

Thursday, April 26, 2007

पर्वत पार क्यों जाना प्रिये
प्रेम -सुधा जब यहीं पे हो बरसे
बैठ मेरे पास तुम प्रिये
रूपसी तेरे संग को तरसे

नीर सरिता जब आंखो से बहे
अभिसार सरिता को भूल जाओगे
पी जाओ मेरे अश्कों को प्रिये
'रूपसी तेरे अनुराग को तरसे

छोड़ दी है सारी शरमो हया
तोड़ दी सब बन्धन दीवार
बाँध ले मुझे अपने आलिंगन में प्रिये
'रूपसी तेरे प्रेम -पाश को तरसे

रोम रोम में मेरे जब
खिल रही है प्रेम -कली
खो जाओ सुगंध में प्रिये
'रूपसी तेरी मदहोशी को तरसे

क्यों छेड़ना कोई राग
जब गुनगुना रहा है मेरा दिल
तेरे प्रेम के सरगम पे प्रिये
'रूपसी तेरे प्रेम -साज़ को तरसे

तेरा प्यार ही मेरा गहना
और है मेरा सोलह -श्रृंगार
जतन से तुम मुझे सजाओ प्रिये
'रूपसी तेरे प्रेम - रतन को तरसे

- रूपसी

NO ! I have not written this marvelous poem. This is a poem 'Someone' posted as a comment to my poem "आयो चलें उस पर्वत पार" !

He/she has not written his/er own name under the poem but of 'Rupsee', my imaginary dream girl. As I saw this wonderful crafting of words, for a moment I was speechless. The poem is simply overflowing with tremendously lovely feelings and affection. After I wrote आयो चलें, I thought I have written a great romantic poem but this one has shown me the mirror and yet I feel honoured.

My sincere thanks and regards to the person who wrote and share these wonderful wording with us and still don't wanna take credit. I hope he/she would show up some time soon. And I would also thank on the behalf on 'Rupsee' who always wanted to show her love for me but was always short of words.

All I wanna ask to writer, why Rupsee sounds so sad here ? As far as I know her, she is a always smiling girl. A bindass girl.