Tuesday, July 31, 2007

Two Jewels !


Juneli said...

Ganene Do.....

hmmmmmm Two Jewels ! but there is another also Gime me the Jewels ! :P :P

The picture is really beautiful and the poem too. The picture reminded me my bachpan. Don't say that in each thing you remember your bachpan. Tum ladaki ho yaa film ka flash back mode :P.

But the ending of the poem is not matching with rest of the shers. If possible make the changes and it's gonna to be one of your good ghazals.

Praney said...

Thanks Juneli, you know I knowlingly leave some possibilities of corrections for you, otherwise you will fall short of words for comments :)

I clicked that pic from park we go to play in the morning.

Anonymous said...

Accha ji toh yeh baat hai.

The flowers really looks beautiful. It's really reminded me my childhood the baag and many more :(

Prem Piyush said...

We do call it Togor flower.

Pure Whiteness and so do a beautiful poem.. Good Combo !