Tuesday, July 17, 2007

'Aaj Phir'



5 comments:

Alka said...

Kya baat hai. :-)Though I find the font size a bit small. :-( Hope your buddy (laptop) is ok now. :-)

Praney said...

Thanks Alka and next time simply click on the poem if you find it diffcult to read :)

And yeah he is OK for now :)

Manish said...

Bhai yeh to badi na-insafi hai. Ab tum hi jaaker le aao :-)

Juneli said...

"Aaj Phir" reminded me my own line.....

Na jaane aaj phir dil bhar aaya
aur ankhe hui num.................

As usual beautiful ghazal :D. You are master!

Kaafiya is fine, Radif is fine, Matla fine, but it seems beher is not..... Beher mean meter. I also don't have good knowledge about beher.

As Manish said why don't you call and tell her to come back, singing, "yaad aa rahi hai teri yaad aa rahi hai, yaad aane se tere jaane se jaan jaa rahi hai..." :)

Keep writing.

Praney said...

Looks like have to Manish :)

Juneli thanks