Wednesday, September 19, 2007

Listen Dear !





3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Praney,
Though trying in your hands in poetry later - you really do good in it.

I like the 'tukant' mastery of yours. At the same time one suggestion is , sometimes I do see in your poems - trying for tukant - the natural flow misses a bit. Let the natural undisciplined poems come out.

May Pyare come up all the odds and his path become smooth.

Praney ! said...

Thanks for your suggestions Prem, wish you could give some examples from this poem also.

And Pyare do need your wishes, thanks again.

Praney ! said...

You can see every bit Juneli, What to say :(