Sunday, April 15, 2007

मेरी प्रथम कविता !






In so many years, it was only today when I decided to try my hand for poetry. Surrounded by so many professional poets, this is indeed a daring attempt. But I dare and now let's see how loud they laugh.


7 comments:

Anonymous said...

Praney its filled with feeling....reading ur poem with music in the background .Pyar hei........ ya sazza.
Its haveing a effect on me.
Desire to read more ....its a
beautifull attempt.Thanks praney

Anonymous said...

Hey Praney who is this rupsee?????
Yaar i doint want u getting serious with her and forgetting me.It made me so jealous. By the way u wrote with so much pain that it hurts me to see u like that.
Next time i like to read a happy romantic poetry written by u with me in ur thoughts.

Praney said...

Thanks Nony, I wrote what came to my mind that moment irrespective of sadness or happiness. Will try not to sound hurt next time.

Rupsee is heroine of my dreams, it's not a name but an addressing.

Manish said...

Usually, a first hand at the poetry is the romantic one. And I must say for you, without any bias, that is a marvellous stuff.

This reminds me of one of yours earliest your posts about your youth days at Chandigarh :-)

Praney said...

Thanks for your kind motivation Manish !

Anonymous said...

Poems posted! :D

hmmm....So this was to follow my steps.

YOU MEAN THIS IS YOUR FIRST ATTEMPT IN POETRY WRITING!!!!! Then I'm speechless.

No words to prise. Keep writing.

"...Surrounded by so many professional poets,..." if you trying to include me in this category then I have to say sorry for that. I'm not a professional poet so that I don't even like to be called poet or poetess as not a single poem has been published so far nor my Hindi is good enough. I just write my feelings.

Praney said...

Thanks thanks and thanks Juneli.